Feedback from pitch

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From the feedback i received, it shows that the main thing i have to do to improve is expand on the idea more and went into the specifics of the idea and how it will. I have taken on board the feedback from my peers and have improved on my rationale. I have done this by firstly adding more content to my power point, further explaining the narrative of the tv advert. I have also expanded my powerpoint by explaining the reasoning why i have chosen to take the tv advert in the direction i want to- as well as adding more detail to everything else. What i have learnt from this is to have more detail in the powerpoint instead of things just being brief.




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